Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Leadership comes naturally one cannot learn to be a leader Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Whereas some believe that leadership comes naturally. I believe leadership can be learned and gained with experience. I feel so for a few reasons that will be explored in the following essay.
To begin with, leadership is a general concept. It can be classified into two notions: charisma and leadership skills. Nowadays, most companies employ coaching companies to convey lectures and train their employees practically. Not to mention, these coaching companies have leadership training programs. They have set theories and applied them to raining employees. It is a whole section of businesses that companies rely on to release team leaders and enhance their employee’s productivity and excellency. This leadership training program includes various training techniques. For example, decomposition of big goals, the use of incentive mechanism, distribution of work, tips on balancing the interest of various parties. Thus, with proper leadership training, one can gain adequate leadership knowledge that assists him to be a great leader even with a lack of natural leadership traits.
In addition, acquired experience plays a crucial role in sculpting the employee’s work personality throughout time. In other words, an employee with five years of experience would behave differently than on his first day at work. For instance, I got hired five years ago at a junior position in an office job. I remember when I was frightened whenever there was any work-related problem. I would even refer these problems to my colleagues. However, after years of experience with customers and work problems. I was able to conceive this experience to my development at work. I learned how to handle any obstacle, no matter how complicated it was. Fortunately, I got promoted after five years to be a team leader. If I didn’t learn from my previous experiences, I wouldn’t have become a leader in my office
To sum up, some are born with leadership naturally. Nevertheless, with adequate leadership education and enough experience, it is not difficult to be a leader.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whereas some believe that leadership comes natu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in other words, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3282208589 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1112839305 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585889570552 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1427560147 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5217391304 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1739130435 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.34782608696 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211262168732 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060261989414 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633953943127 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150923267739 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592832308915 0.0645574589148 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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