Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The continous advancement in technology is making modern life very easy.I personally believe that the life nowadays are far more easier than it used to earlier.I feel this way for 2 reasons which i will explore in this essay.
To begin with,modern communication technology is a backbone of almost all the economic activity around the globe.The new communication techniques can send transfer a message between two places faster than a blink of an eye which have made life a lot easier than before.for example,when my grandfather was a young man he used to work as a software engineer in an Indian firm.There he had to work for clients all over the world which require frequent communication with clients to provide them their product with full satisfaction but as there was no e-mail and fax machine was not invented at that so, he had to mail the printout of the programms and query to his clients which some times took longer a than a week to reach its destination and return with a reply.This sometimes led to a communication gap between client and the service providers.
Secondly, modern education is revolutionized by the invention of the internet.A student can take classes of a university while sitting in his home far away from the actual class.Also, the abundance of important content has made it easier for people to collect knowledge of any subject without paying anything.For instance,In the year 2020 when the world was hit by the Covid-19 pandemic due to which all the educational had to shut down their school untill the normal situation resumes.This resulted in online virtual classes in almost all the colleges, universities, and institutes all over the world so that students could continue their studies without wasting any time.If it had not been the internet,many students would have to waste a lot of time of their academic year.
In conclusion,I am of the opinion that the lives lived by our grandparents were much harder than the lives we live today. This is because of the reasons like advanced communication and the internet which are helping millions of students and professional workers in getting their work done efficiently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01111111111 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93249146168 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586111111111 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.1344086022 358% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 314.094635421 48.9658058833 641% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 360.8 100.406767564 359% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.0 20.6045352989 349% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.4 5.45110844103 393% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134957863295 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745189256622 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448395884235 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867475604083 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411999336805 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.2 11.7677419355 325% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.6 58.1214874552 -3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.10430107527 280% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 10.1575268817 309% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.16 8.01818996416 139% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 10.002688172 305% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.0537634409 306% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.247311828 303% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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