Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Life is getting more complicated every day and trends in quality of life have been called into question. Some people believe that new generations experience a better life than their grandparents while others feel that life was much easier fifty years ago. Personally, I am of the opinion that humans feel much comfort in their daily life in the present-day. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, it seems that modern life has made our lives easier and more comfortable. New time-saving machines are being made to meet the specific needs of people. Also, modernity has brought about convenience which has reduced household chores. My mother's experience demonstrates that this is true. Way before dishwasher's production, my mother used to wash them all by herself and this would not only make her tired and fall behind her schedule but also the pain she would suffer from it because of her diseases was intolerable. As soon as the new machine was launched we bought it for my mother as a gift and if it was not for technology, she would not feel better both physically and mentally.
Secondly, technology has increased the standard of living in other aspects like communication and traveling. Thinking of a hundred years ago, people might have had a tough time to migrate or go on a vacation without planes or up-to-the-minute trains and as a result, they might have become exhausted inevitably. It is worth pointing out that the pace of development in technology and science provides a situation in which humans are able to rest and feel calm and relaxed, in consequence, people are much happier in comparison to past and more satisfied. For example, I have heard about my aunt who was accepted in the university far from her hometown and family where there was no cellphone or even telephone to be in touch with her parents. Moreover, insufficient transportation infrastructure forced her to stay in that city. Therefore she got homesick and that situation stimulated negative emotions such as depression and aggression. When she came back after ten years she found out that her father had been dead for a week and the lack of telecommunication system was the main reason for her unawareness.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that living in the twenty-first century is more painless. This is because innovative experts are creating new devices useful for human’s life and people can travel all around the world in less than a month.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 829, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ucture forced her to stay in that city. Therefore she got homesick and that situation sti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2076.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91943127962 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86166851589 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575829383886 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4131115045 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.263157895 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2105263158 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52631578947 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138728477306 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405336818136 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406897627008 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883710879928 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338963934801 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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