Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, we are in situation where the world is changing and becoming more sophisticated. As a resukt of this progreession people's life is changing days after days. Some people are of the opinion that todays' life condition is more comfortable than the past time, others belive that the life was easier in time when oyr grandparents were children. When it comes to me, it is my firm conviction that, todays, people have easier life. To support this, there are several reasons, two of which are going to be aplty explored in the following.
First and foremost, the most prominent reason which comes to my mind is that, technology is on aan exponetianl speed, and thanks to the improvement of science and technology, people are provided with an aesier lif condition. The advent of different technological devices as well as a lot of online services help people do get their tasks done with a fewer demand of time and energy that they should spend in the past. As a result, people can save their time and energy and they are less exhausted and the end of a day which is beneficial for them to have a healthier life. For example, in the childhood of my prandparents, when they wanted to communicate with of their siblings who lived in a foriegn country, they had to paas a lot of section to have access to telegraph and convey their message to him. This took a long part of their time, but now they can keep in touch with each others by using their smartphone anywhere at anytime they want.
Another noteworthy reason that should be taken into account is that, a certain region does not access to all sources of basic requierment for living and people should be in contact with others in different regions to provide this sources for their life. In this regard, in the past, people had to transport from one place to another by horses or other animals, and, also they were in danger of a lot of problems such as attackers. But, now due to the presence of a large number of trasportation features like cars, trains, ships, to name but few; people have easier access to their needs. As an illustration, take the example of a situation in which merchants and trader were attacked by robbers, in this condition they cannot provide their local people with some sources of food or other needs which were inceficient in their regions. As a result, people had to tolerate tough situation in their lives to stay alive.This issues are not reasonable in todays life and people are experiencing more comfortable life than they had in the past.
In short, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the coclusion that, nowadays, people live easier life than did they live in the past time. The fact that advancment of science and technology make people life easier, coupled with the fact that basic sources for living a life are more accessable, is the fact which strengthens my claim.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...ys. Some people are of the opinion that todays life condition is more comfortable than...
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Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
... condition is more comfortable than the past time, others belive that the life was easier...
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Line 2, column 727, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun section seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of sections'.
Suggestion: a lot of sections
... in a foriegn country, they had to paas a lot of section to have access to telegraph and convey ...
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Line 3, column 463, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ackers. But, now due to the presence of a large number of trasportation features like cars, train...
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Line 3, column 917, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
... situation in their lives to stay alive.This issues are not reasonable in todays lif...
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Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...e easier life than did they live in the past time. The fact that advancment of science an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, well, for example, in short, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 82.0 52.1666666667 157% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2366.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 505.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68514851485 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57984921998 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473267326733 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 735.3 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.686397542 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.176470588 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7058823529 20.6045352989 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175641523258 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669898052876 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649581854959 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129884964752 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585101083495 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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