. Which one can make friendship stronger?
• Having a good time with your friend (Enjoy good time)
• Solving your problem with him or her (talk about
problem)
• Supporting each other
No one can cast doubt on the fact that ones need to establish some relationship with others on order to have a better life in the sophisticated world. Friendship is one of the important kind of relationships. There are three approach for making our friendship stronger : having good times with our friends, solving our problems enlisting their helping hands, or supporting each other. When it comes to me, it is my firm convition that the latter one is the most practical approach. To support this, there are several reasons, two of which are going to be aptly explored in the following.
First and foremost, the most prominent reason which comes to my mind is that, however establishing a friendship seems easy, maitaing that and making the relation stronger is very demanding. One has to spend a significant part of her time paying painstaking attention to her friends to show them that they are important for her. Needless to say, by supporting our friends we are provided with a golden chance to show their importance for us and win their trust in our friendship. Psychologicaly speaking, when both sides of a friedship win the trust each other, their emotional bonds start tightenning and they can enjoy their companionship.
Another noteworthy reason that should be taken into account is that, it is an obvios fact for all people that an individual cannot continue moving forward toward her or his goals by his own during all situation of his life. As a result, a great source of support is required for one to incentivize him keep going on and never give up. It goes without saying that, by gaining this support from a friend, friends are given the golden chance to strengthen their relationship, because they can count on each other in every difficult situation they encounter during their lives so they will be able to overcome the hurdles with more impetus. For example, a couple of years ago, I was participating in a race, during the race I was disappointed to be able win the first place and I slowed down my speed, by the encouragement of one of my friends make me more intended to keep continue to be the winner. At the end, I winned the first place and my relationship with my that friend also became stronger due to some positive emotion that her approach subconsciously made in my mind.
In short, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that supporting friends is a practical approach in order to have astronger friendship. The fact that supporting behaviour helps them to trust each other, coupled with some subconscouisly effects it causes in their minds, is the reason which strengthens my claim.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, then, as to, for example, in short, kind of, as a result, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2187.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82781456954 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82014461774 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512141280353 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 652.5 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.1628776662 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.6875 100.406767564 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3125 20.6045352989 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30335429841 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985850838936 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716838702269 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200476371388 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804278293185 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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