Which one can make friendship stronger?
• Having a good time with your friend (Enjoy good time)
• Solving your problem with him or her (talk about problem)
• Supporting each other
Friendship is a widespread relationship between the humankind that existed form the appearance of humankind in the ancient society. The relationship is a fundamental communication that caused a lot of consequence such as merchandise, marriage, … for different stratum of society. As far as I concerned, friendship have a lot of merits that it not described in the words and the most noteworthy part of friendship is supporting each other for every situation that happened for us. In the following paragraphs I am going to parapharase my perspective.
in the beginning, I am believing that have a strong and knitted relationship beyond the family members is critical for everyone. I can not share some feeling with my family but having a buddy is more appealing for me. I can have a syptom shoulder to cry on when I have a situation to relive my tension beyond the family. My example could be a testimonial for my claim. When I was a graduate student in master degree, I had some struggle and debate about doing thesis with my advisor. I can not share my problems with my family because they can not understand and decipher that because they not have experience in the academic envioronment and experience in the past. My friend in the doorm have a same relationship with her mentor and can give a proper advice and hand to lead a right circumstance with my professor. Admittedly, After that situation, I can more rely on this friend because she support me at a predicament.
Another equally noteworthy point in corroborating my viewpoint is that my friends to support me. they are more likely to to support me not only in harshness but also to doing in some activity. They is more probably to ability to practical support me whenever I need. Since, they are more probably same the age, situation and condition. We can plenty of activity such as hobby, entertainment, group sport etc. For example, I can do mountaineering with my friends at jym.
to Recapitulate, friendship is a basic relationship in the socity that nobody can deny the crtictial role and importantance of it in the health and philantrophic society. I inclined that supporting eachother in happiness and melancholy situation can cause a strong friendship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89947089947 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13556241059 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481481481481 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3802791194 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.95 5.45110844103 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179884892944 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567384833327 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462055790311 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103334658903 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373821532183 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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