Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important problems in today’s world will be solved in our lifetime.
In today's hectic city of life, in which life has trials and tribulations, vast majorities of people look for a better life. In fact, there several viewpoints regarding life in the modern world. Various points of view which are germane to matter being discussed brings us to the moot question as to whether the most significant difficulties will be solved in our lifetime. However, the popular sentiment to which I vehemently cling is that people should make efforts and bend over backward when they face myriads of problems. The underlying aim of this essay is to put forward some cogent reasons to shed light on the number of issues in this framework.
To commence with, life difficulties definitely come in different form and shapes and they can be sweet or painful as well. Indeed, life difficulties always accompany us in the whole life and only mature human beings have to admit that success will be a blank dream without difficulties. Broadly speaking, there is a possibility that people confront various problems in their lives. So, they have to face the problem in order to overcome the barrier vigorously and successfully without doing something wrong. As a tangible example, whenever I run into a huge problem, I ask help from my elder brother and my parents owing to the fact that they have experienced the similar situation as I may come across. They consciously listen to my words and provide the useful and helpful opinion to make me lively and motivated. So, in these situations, when I face a difficulty, I will be able to make a sound decision and throw my stress away to reach a conspicuous success. To elucidate more on this issue, although problems might be solved with the pass of time, human beings should do their best in order to defeat and repel any obstacle.
Another salient point in corroborating my stance is the fact that with technological advancement there would be no more problem in humans' lives. If we take a minute to ponder over it, humans have always put their efforts so as to handle any intricate and perplexing problem accurately and precisely. For instance, nowadays machines in big corporations are dependent on computers to work properly. So, working with computers will provide fertile ground for people to handle any difficult situation without waiting for time. It can be deduced from a combination of breadth of coverage and depth of detail that not only can human's knowledge expunge difficulties in any realm but also can help people to confront challenges successfully.
However, every coin has two sides. There are many important problems, in which nothing or no one could address them greatly. For example, when people suffer from an emotional pain, just time could be a great poultice for their pain. So, in this case, time will help them to alleviate their pain and recover. However, it was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are more reasonable grounds that can lend weight to my personal perspective.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, look, may, regarding, so, well, as to, broadly speaking, for example, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2515.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 510.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93137254902 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75217629947 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72299293125 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541176470588 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 789.3 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8052558754 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.791666667 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.20833333333 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17716903172 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454116223485 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516977572663 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797280224809 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543880771757 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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