Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The most important problems in today’s world will be solved in our lifetime.
As we live in a chaotic and fast-peace world, it is crucial for us to pay more attention to our lifestyle. Mannerism and etiquette are the most important pillars of each society in today’s world. Due to the fact, we have some responsibilities toward our country and society, we should be more aware. A controversial question that is often raised regarding this issue is whether the most important problems in today’s world will be solved in our lifetime, or whether it will remind to next generation. Some people possess the conviction that the former is more agreeable whereas others hold exactly the opposite and allege that the latter has a high chance to occur. I am personally content that this issue is multifaceted. In particular, we all have some duties against our society. Consequently, I think the root of all the world's problems will be solved in the future. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind elucidating my standpoint is that Although there are many differences in each notion, we all live in the same world. There are some factors that can describe as global features. We all have certain considerations about our earth, in some other respects, we are responsible for our lives on the earth. Can someone tell that he or she never cares about air pollution and greenhouse gasses that have affected the earth? Probably not. In this regard, I think all individuals try hard to drop and regulate the features that have a positive relationship between them and their lives. Consider the initiate ages and the people who lived at that time. Are we faced with those hard situations that they faced? No shield, no cloth, no valuable food.
The second rationale reason behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that we can search history and see what happened to ancient peoples. Presumably, they tried hard to make some inventions and made their lives better. They made our lives easier. We can learn from lessons in history that there was some nation that was sleeved. But in the modern day, there is no slavery as prevalent as past. Like African people in the United States.
In brief, due to the aforementioned reasons, I think the most important problems in today’s world will be solved in our lifetime.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, regarding, second, so, whereas, i think, in brief, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8671679198 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70443601486 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538847117794 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5569972672 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9166666667 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232242589735 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631700288385 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105099125862 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187085592501 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162743617985 0.0645574589148 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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