do you agree or disagree with the following statement? the most important characteristic of a successful leader or politician is the ability to communicate well.
Contemporary human lives in a sophisticated world where changing is acquiring at a galloping rate. leaders have their own preferred methods to leads their goals toward success, and all of them have their benefits. No one can deny there are positive aspects of communicating well with other people. If I were to lead my people or my group, I would definitely like to generate a healthy communicate with my team. It is my firm belief that have a strong communicate push us toward success for a number of reasons, and I will develop these reasons in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, one should take into account the fact that when leaders establish a fruitful communicate, people’s motivation increase. this, this encouragement gives them a sense of purpose, so they establish for themselves both short and long goals and strive for each day. Moreover, they surmount difficult problems and promote their place and leads their country toward success. my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. when I was a freshman I was working as an intern for a local magazine, and I was such an amateurish person because I did not have a robustness background about this job. Therefore, my supervisor launched to communicate with me friendly rather than humiliated me. As a result, I earned plenty of incentive, and attempted so hard to help the company achieved their goals. Had my supervisor encouraged me to learn wide range of tasks, I would not have enough impetus to assist company obtained their objectives.
The second remarkable reason is that we perceive that our leader will support us in demanding situations when he set off to communicate respectfully with us. Not only do we relax and release tension, but also we can focus on specific areas of a subject rather than doing broad overview because when we are in predicament we know that our leaders help us to overcome the problems. my own experience is a compelling answer. Following my graduation from university, I drew up plans to starts a small software development firm for my leader. I relied on my leader because by generating such a well communication he had guaranteed to support me in strenuous condition. As a result, I relive my pressure and without any anxiety proposed a detailed plan, and I was confident that my leader business would be a success.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that establishing effective communicate push leaders toward success because he encourages other people and increase their motivations and because people think our leader support us in hard condition and works without stress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2201.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03661327231 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95426265613 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8215432624 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.05 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.85 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146914358573 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474054622013 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399462987442 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10091404106 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347315365855 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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