Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
At the turn of the new century, with the development of human's modern society, more and more people tend to explore new things specifically, the young people. Actually, people's attitudes toward this issue are varied from person to person. Although many would argue that the movies and television have more negative effects, In my opinion, social media has more positive effects on society in general and the young generation is particularly. I would suggest two reasons based on my general facts in addition to my personal experiences to support the argument.
The first aspect to point out is that no one can cast a shadow of doubt on the fact that in today's sophisticated world. Social media is the most important part of our life. the efficiency of a society is measured by the degree and the quality of its use the technology to name but a few TV, internet, and smartphone. many benefits quickly stem from social media. A vivid example can be given to shed light on what has elaborated above. take an example a freshman graduated from his university this year and he has not any knowledge or experience in life and he needs to know a lot of skills; furthermore, he must open the TV and internet to gain any data to help him such as of channel National Geographic, CNN, BBC and TV program etc...Admittedly, social media is omnipresent in our daily life.
the second exquisite point to be mentioned is that the technology (i.e. TV and internet) is a great teacher to build character without any help from any person; Nowadays, everything becomes easy to gain anything in the world without any effort which we can to reach any news easily access through the virtual world, the internet, and TV program. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I remember when in university in my country, my professor required me a research about the global warming; moreover, I was read a lot of books and several references and watch many scientist programs to help me to make this research. Indeed, I did it through the technology to helped me to finalize it without any human support.
To draw a conclusion, taking what I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that the merits of TV program are much more than the demerits, due to bringing exchange lifestyle and helps the young in their main daily works.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, in addition, in general, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74689826303 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7277684377 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565756823821 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.4767436651 48.9658058833 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.533333333 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8666666667 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126402132592 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432366017752 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613684666467 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838354993725 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799125729887 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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