Do agree or Disagree" We must always tell the truth in relationships.
Maintaining healthy relationships can be very difficult in today's world. and there are many aspects of our interactions with others that we need to worry about. A majority of people believe that honesty is one of most important characteristic one can find in their friend. I would suggest two reasons based on my general facts in addition to my personal experiences to support the argument.
In the first place, telling small lies can sometimes motivate the people we care about. Humans are very competitive and want to be the best at whatever they are involved in an athletic event or taking a test at school, they feel more motivated if they think it is possible that they will achieve an impressive result. In cases like these, sometimes lying about their potential can encourage them to perform well. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Last year, My wife signed up for a marathon in our city. I knew that she would struggle to even finish the event, but i wanted her to feel confident in his ability. Accordingly, when she asked me about my opinion, I lied and said that a chance of finishing in the top ten. This gave her a lot of confidence and she dedicated herself to training for the marathon. Even though she did not win the race my small lie was enough to maintain his motivation both before and during the race.
Secondly, being honest all of the time can lead to high levels of anxiety. If we tell unpleasant truths, we may spend days or hours worrying about the possible consequences of what we have revealed. A vivid example can be given to shed light on what has elaborated above, Last week a colleague asked me what I thought of her new hairstyle. I was honest and said that I thought it looked terrible. Though he did not express any anger at my remarks, I could see that she was really hurt by what I said. As a result of this, I spent the rest of the day worrying that I had jeopardized our relationships.
In conclusion, I believe that there are times when it is best to not tell the truth to others. this is because lies can motivate people to perform well and because always being honest can sometimes cause personal turmoil.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54591836735 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59704903338 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563775510204 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9342739142 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8571428571 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0803528180067 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0252604006203 0.076458572812 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464581120838 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0570101355168 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346645816918 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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