Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
At the turn of the new century, with the development of humans and modern technology, more and more people tend to explore new things, specifically children. Although many would argue that the parents shouldn't help their children to depend on themselves, in my opinion, the father and mother must to support their children to succeed and achieve their goals also maintain on them. I would suggest two reasons based on my general facts in addition to my personal experiences to support the argument.
The first aspect to point out is that many benefits quickly stem from our parents. Admittedly, father and mother are a great teacher to build their children due to they are the first school for children. To being with, online investigative reporting plays a major role in the expansion the parents will protect their youth from a lot of danger if they helped and supported their young in the first days of their life. I would like to mention noteworthy research conduct by CSR institute in India. the discovered results suggest that Seventy-Five percent of the young people indulge themselves in wrong activities due to their parents didn't teach them what is right and what is wrong in the past.
Secondly, technology is omnipresent in our daily life. I still affirm the same idea because there is no guarantee that the technology is played role in our formation children because the internet is the most important part of our lives. the efficiency of a society is measured by the degree and the quality of its use the internet; Furthermore, all of the thing in the world became ease. if the parents not controlling in their children, they will doing anything is wrong. take an example if the father doesn't focus on child and he didn't teach the social roles for the young people, maybe will doing a crime in society to name but a few, take drugs, steal anything, and killed another person.
To draw a conclusion, taking what I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that one of the most important things today the parents should focus on their children because the world became open for anything to protect their children for any punish from a society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83827493261 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52707169538 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530997304582 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8279152827 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.214285714 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221048312135 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710322261145 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635204741471 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134947507767 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389118115315 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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