Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Movies and televesion have become a indispensable part of modern life. Yearly thousands of the movies are produced around the world, many of which have great influence on people who watch them. Many people believe that the movies and television have more negative effects than positive efffects on the way young people behave. However, I do not agree with this notion, for two considerable reasons, each of which are elaborate here.
It is a widely held axiom that the books have great effect on the education of people, and it is necessary to read some books, so that you become a sophisticated person. Well, in my opinion movies are the modern books. The technological advancements have made life very busy and fast in the most urban areas of the world. In the past, people had a lot of free time they didn't know how to enjoy, and the books where a good solution. Today, the life has become so compact that people cannot spend many days to read book so that they get aware of a story. Instead, movies are brief and they end in less than two hours, in which people can learn the whole story. There are many books that are depicted in movies, and as our younger generation are not too inclined to read books, they can be benefited from these movies. So, it is all positive effect in this way.
Alongside what we discussed above, young people can gain great experience by watching movies. Human's life span is so short that he cannot experience everything he carve for. Most of us have to choose a path in life and pursue it. Movies are about diverse subjects and they inlude many different characters. When you watch a movie, in fact, you can live life as the characters of the movie and experience many exciting activities. On the other hand it is good to know the consequences of many available decisions before actually trying them in your life. When you watch a movie you can see what happens to the characters of the movie when they decide wrongly, for example by choosing to make a lot of money by smuggling drugs.
Anyway it is true that movies and television can have some negative effects on the young people too. They may spend a lot time watching movies and television and get behind of their studies. In addition, they may be influenced by the sexual scenes and also the violence in the movies. These are the reasons why many people insist on their negativity.
According to what we discussed, although many people may think that the negative effects of these media are more than their positive ones, I think the other way. Movies and televisions can have great benefits for the juvenile, especially if they be a little helped to choose the right movies and programs to watch. Not only will they learn effeciently from the movie, even better than the books, but also they acquire a diverse range of experiences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
Movies and televesion have become a indispensable part of modern life. Year...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ast, people had a lot of free time they didnt know how to enjoy, and the books where ...
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Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'carves'.
Suggestion: carves
...that he cannot experience everything he carve for. Most of us have to choose a path i...
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Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... about diverse subjects and they inlude many different characters. When you watch a movie, in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, anyway, but, however, if, may, so, well, for example, i think, in addition, in fact, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2329.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 502.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63944223108 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40467622324 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464143426295 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 744.3 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9467266905 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5769230769 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57692307692 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279437512068 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851997766265 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993479563634 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184549974119 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803788684884 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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