Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In my country, young people have a better life today than their parents enjoyed when they were young. Use reasons and examples to support your answer.
Personally, I see more positive than negative aspects in life today, so I strongly agree with that. Firstly, today the travelling is way more affordable and secondly we have so many various ways to entertain ourselves than before.
To begin with, Bulgaria is ex- comunism country and as such region, people who lived there weren’t able to travel for business , pleasure or for searching a better opportunities for living . Now everything has been changed .We travel a lot easier with faster cars onto new highways and with airplanes that we could spend the weekend in cities as such as London or Vienna and to be on our working place at the beginning of the week .All of this without any prohibitions or restrictions like before. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience .Education abroad is also possible as part as freely moving of people. Therefore, you become a citizen of the world very easy.
Likewise, today youth can entertain themselves with so many different sources .To go to a concert of the favourite west rock group ,watching the newest Hollywood movies on the tablet, learning Chinesse or international cooking from videos on internet our just stay home while we instant messing or video call with our friends around the globe while we sit on the couch. Our parents didn’t have all these different type of entertain because of the develop of the new technologies .They had only coffeterias or if they want to know more ,they needed to be a whole day in the library in order to find the information they needed. Thus, for us today is a lot easier than before.
In the light of the above mentioned reasons I believe that the life in our country is better .We travel more often and we could have excellent time wherever we want.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78412698413 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63734849449 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625396825397 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.718469011 48.9658058833 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.7 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 20.6045352989 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 5.45110844103 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158739886909 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659048947363 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310426008443 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968393955262 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208912816483 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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