Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? My lifestyle is easier and more comfortable than the one my grandparents experienced when they were young. Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Some people say that life in the past was much easier than it is currently because in the past we were not overwhelmed with lots of information. However, others think otherwise. They state that nowadays we have many facilities which bring our lives to become easier. In my opinion, life nowadays is definitely easier than it used to be and I feel this way because of the following reasons as I will talk over in this article.
First of all, nowadays we have many facilities or, better stating , we have cars, airplanes, motorcycle which bring us a fast way to do our duties. For example, if we want to travel abroad, then we should take an airplane and a few hours we will be arriving in our destination. The same is valid for cars and motorcycle. If we want to go to a friend house, thus we will drive and get there by leaps and bounds. We do not need to depend on public transportation as people used to do in the past and had to spend hours waiting for bus. Therefore, this example elucidates how the life has been changing from the past.
Moreover, currently we are used to speaking with friends and family via mobile phones and in the past our grandfather barely owned a telephone. For instance, if we are living abroad we merely need to use the whats app tool and then we can get in touch with family and friends. Also, we may use our lap top for work. We can use the conference video to talk to our boss and clients pretty fast or, maybe, send them an email. Thus, those instances illustrate how different life today is from the past.
Finally, I strongly support that life not only is better from the past but, also, it has been changed drastically because nowadays we have facilities as cars, mobile phones, motorcycle, and we have an easy way of communication overseas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34662576687 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39751940318 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 326.0 20.1344086022 1619% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1417.0 100.406767564 1411% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 326.0 20.6045352989 1582% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 144.0 5.45110844103 2642% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0967025849169 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967025849169 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693901264449 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573368859508 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 162.1 11.7677419355 1377% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -242.49 58.1214874552 -417% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 128.1 10.1575268817 1261% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.43 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.08 8.01818996416 275% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 10.002688172 570% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 132.4 10.0537634409 1317% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 10.247311828 556% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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