Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
No books should ever be banned.
Some people believe that no books should ever be banned. However, I disagree. In my opinion, there will always be books that need to be banned for welfare of public. I support my statement with two reasons.
Firstly, just as some internet sites are not good for children, similarly there are some books that should not be accessible to children or banned. Books which have explicit content like sexual images like savita bhabhi, naughty america magazine, should not be allowed for childrens to read. These type of books can have bad impact on both physical and mental health of the childrens. For example, I remember, my nephew was struggling in his studies because he was addicted to an adult magazines; always reading those books that are inapporpriate for his age. The more he read that book, the more he became mentally unstable. In the end, we had to admit him in a rehab center so he could learn to control his addictions. Thus, some books with explicit content should be banned for children.
Secondly, there are books which instigates inorder and chaos in the society, these books should be banned to maintain peace and order. There are malicious factions in every society, there main and only aim is to instigate the chaos, disorder and tumult in the society by brainwashing young minds into following them. For example, in afghanistan, taliban, a local militant group, recruits yound men to follow there regimes by printing various books containing hateful words. These books are the very reasons that innocent lifes are consumed in a never ending conflict of regions, religion and politics. Thus, the books which create mental turpitude and chaos should be banned from the general public.
In conclusion, there can be countries in which these problems do not exist and so, no books should be banned in these countries. But majority of the countries face these problems. Thus, it is recommended that some of the books should be banned.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: magazine
...ies because he was addicted to an adult magazines; always reading those books that are in...
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Suggestion: public
...ude and chaos should be banned from the general public. In conclusion, there can be countri...
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... do not exist and so, no books should be banned in these countries. But majority ...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... problems. Thus, it is recommended that some of the books should be banned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96036585366 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46999957551 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548780487805 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0002408762 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6315789474 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2631578947 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.85842293907 389% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344581718856 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115570696652 0.076458572812 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0975956567361 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241643795067 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681779101575 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.