Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A controversial issue relating to whether young adults seek out for celebrity opinions more than elders, has brought to the attention of relevant people. Many people believe that the same as youngsters and seniors are interested to now about what celebrities think. However, in my opinion, teenagers are more curious than elderly people. This is because they always look for someone to look up to such as a hero. And because the majority of seniors think that they are wise enough that they do not need to know what others think.
To begin with, looking for a hero or a role models has always been the youngster's tendency. In other words, teenagers tend to listen to people who they admire and seriously consider their opinions to be valuable. For example, two decades ago, when I was at a college-age young adult, one of my role models was an actress Jenifer Aniston. I admired her so much such as every opinion that she had for a particular topic was very important to me. Furthermore, I shaped my opinions based on her thoughts. That was because she always inspired me and I wanted to follow her foot steps. Actually, like me, there are young people who have their own hero who looks up to. What is more, nowadays, it is even easier to follow them via social media accounts such as Twitter and Facebook. According to my example, it is clear that young adults tend to seriously consider the celebrity opinions.
Furthermore, thinking about their wisdom, older people do not need to base their opinions on what they hear from famous people. In fact, they believe that they are smart enough that their ideas are even more important that those of the celebrities. For instance, my grandmother was always critical of what others thought about current issues that our society is facing at the moment. When she hears celebrities say something, she thinks that their opinions are useless and not real. Moreover, she says that they are not trust worthy. In addition, she believes that her own opinions have more value than celebrity thoughts.
Overall, old people think that they are wise enough; hence, they just trust their own opinions more than everybody else.
In conclusion, young people tend to listen to celebrity opinions more than seniors. This is because new generation tend to look up to role models, and what they say sound very important to them. And because old people think that they are wise enough, so, they do not need to hear someone else's thoughts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youngsters'' or 'youngster's'?
Suggestion: youngsters'; youngster's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2048.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80751173709 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40810749003 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467136150235 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 633.6 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5203996705 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.3333333333 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240080641988 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079372237838 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539105194078 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167011725035 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266941592482 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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