Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Information is the most important thing to consider in this era, that is the information age. People are informed about different contexts from different sources every day, so the matter of resources broadcasting information is getting more and more attention. Though some people receive data from a single source, others are inclined to be informed from various sources. I am of the opinion that getting information from different perspectives and channels is way effective than using only one resource, and I have a couple of reasons to support my idea.
First, using distinct information channels or resources provide people with different perspectives and aspects of a subject. Using various resources will definitely lead to a better understanding of the agenda, and better assessment of the data, so people become well-informed.As an instance, I wanted to buy a cell-phone for my mother last week, and I visited one of the famous online sites that sells smartphones. I gained a lot of information about the products that caught my eye, but the site did not include all the information I needed. I had to visit other sites and after a lot of consideration, I finally found the information I need by juxtaposing various information from different sources. Using different resources quietly helped me towards choosing the best product for purchase.
Second, the media and information resources are susceptible to conveying biased messages or taking sides, so using one resource raises the possibility for an individual to become cognitively biased. It has been proved in research that cognitive biases influence individuals in their decisions, and one of the countervailing activities that can be associated with this phenomenon is using different aspects from different channels. For example, each soccer team has its channels to inform people about the activities regarding the teams, news, rumors, etc. Fans of the teams will likely join these channels, and their judgment is influenced by the biased message these channels can share. For clarification, a channel associated to support a specific team will not share information about the immoral actions of their players and instead focuses on the positive characteristics of the team such as honors, skills, talents, etc. Consequently, using only one resource of information escalates the rate of prejudice and bias, and deviates people from being well-informed about a subject.
Finally, I am of the opinion that it is better to make decisions by getting information from various resources, that mitigates the rate of prejudice, and provides people with a better assessment of the data, leading to a better understanding of the matter and being well-informed. An individual will not judge correctly by percieving information from only one or few resources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 277, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, if, regarding, second, so, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2375.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3490990991 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10803874449 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484234234234 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 749.7 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5879262872 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.705882353 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1176470588 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317534527957 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122547719171 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579789978354 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214289080522 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535806094652 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 58.1214874552 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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