Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Information is a power in the present world. The more tidbit of information on your mind, the more studied and enlighten individual you are. People surrounding you are infatuated by your lucubrating and sensible mind. In order to get information we should search information from different sources is parallel with someone opinion but others would have not. In my view, learning from different medias is pretty excellent for anyone for the following two important reason.
The main and foremost reason is that, in the modern age it is possible to use the internet in order to sift our required information. Internet is the wild source of snippets and it is accessible from anywhere whether you are in northern hemisphere or southern hemisphere is not a matter if you have a strong connection of internet. For example, a few days ago I was working with my research manuscripts for my M.Sc. degree in my University. Often time I need to go to my supervisors for his support and different statistical analysis. But, it was an arduous task for me to go and accumulate those information in an ordered manner. Later, I went online and search on Google regarding my problems and surprisingly I had found everything according to my needs within minimum amount of time. As you can see that, by using search engine it helped to smooth the hassle and save our valuable time.
Another reason is that it is also possible to acquire the information in a traditional way such as, going to the library, museum, arts show, symposium and also book fair. If the goal is fixed to become a studied person then the source is immense. For instance, in library where horizontal learning is possible, where the smell of the book is also seems surreal. At my university life, we were frequently went to our main library. In our library there were lots of books on our country and outside of the country. I used to read mainly our literature that attract me a lot. By reading those books, I have experienced that vastness of Bengali literature and I am literally proud of that chance. This experience taught me that, horizontal learning also enable us to get suffuse amount of information.
To wrap up, someone would have also proclaims that, different sources of learning would not require but in long run this type of proclamations will not survive. Learning from different sources not only easy our tasks but also let us know our own history. So, we should learn from multiple sources rather than drawing any line in this case.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sc
...g with my research manuscripts for my M.Sc. degree in my University. Often time I ...
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Line 3, column 592, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'those informations'?
Suggestion: this information; those informations
...rduous task for me to go and accumulate those information in an ordered manner. Later, I went onl...
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Line 3, column 610, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an ordered manner" with adverb for "ordered"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... to go and accumulate those information in an ordered manner. Later, I went online and search on Goo...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a traditional way" with adverb for "traditional"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...lso possible to acquire the information in a traditional way such as, going to the library, museum, ...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rts show, symposium and also book fair. If the goal is fixed to become a studied p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, then, for example, for instance, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2082.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80831408776 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72244549752 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538106235566 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6667926904 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5217391304 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8260869565 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5652173913 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184257993321 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534771138392 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518327552561 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121909576204 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949039575401 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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