Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

As we all know if we decide to plant a tree we firstly have to bury the seed in ground and also provide all sort of nourishment to the plant so it will grow strong and will have the capability that they can grow strong and bold. Similar is the relationship which a child and parent shares. Where how your parent who is the first teacher right from your birth will guide accordingly the child will grow.
Teachers are the individual who try to inculcate good habits and always help their children in order to overcome difficulties. In other words, Right from the day when child take birth parent are always involved in all the activities. They always want their children to be best for this they always struggle a lot indeed to fulfill the requirement of their children. As every child is very close to their parent. So I think there are many reason through which I can justify that parent are very important and best teacher for their children.
The bond share by parent and child is so pure that whatever it may be child will always overcome any difficult situation if their parents are supportive. Hence, anything can be easily acquire. Children knows that parents always believe in them. For instance, when I was in my Graduation I was not able to perform well in my academic programs that time my parents where the only support who have always motivated me to give my best and taught me to never give up in your life.
Secondly, parents always understand their children better than anyone. You can share any sort of concurred with your parents because they don’t judge you they will always help with the solution to the problem. Children go to school or colleges whatever behavior or the attitude which the child have that completely depend on the teaching which your parent have given.
So I believe that wherever you go parent are the best teacher form who you an learn at any possible time. They will help, share, motivate you whenever possible.

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Average: 6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... firstly have to bury the seed in ground and also provide all sort of nourishment...
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Line 1, column 292, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...onship which a child and parent shares. Where how your parent who is the first teache...
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Line 2, column 366, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...fill the requirement of their children. As every child is very close to their pare...
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Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...arent are the best teacher form who you an learn at any possible time. They will h...
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Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...arent are the best teacher form who you an learn at any possible time. They will help, s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i think, sort of, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67146974063 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34046219583 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489913544669 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6869629166 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3529411765 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4117647059 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150578957706 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057080755842 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429021081534 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988690670053 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359830639773 0.0645574589148 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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