Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Some people believe that parents cannot be best teachers because their mission is only parenting for their children,. However, in my opinion, parents are the best teachers from the day children were born to the day death of the parent or children.
For preschool ages (born to six year), parents are guides for children. How to crawl or walk, how to speak, how to communicate or play with others are all taught by a parent. This indisputable that a parent is everything that a child can have in these years. For example, I have a two year old daughter and try to teach her everything that she can learn at this age. I am not only her mother, but also her best friend and the person who loves her more than everything.
At school ages- 6 year to 18 year old children-, parents, teachers, and friends are the teachers for an individual. Parents are shaped their children's characteristics. For example, if a student has grown up in a family that provide comfortable environment and always respect for their child's opinion, that student can not only become an successful adult but also has good personalities. In addition, children learn math, physic, or chemistry from their teachers. However, teachers have limited time to devote a child and a lot of students in one class. Therefore, teachers may not attend children's physiological development. Also, friends are also teachers at these ages especially for adolescents, but they may not be the best teachers who show what is wrong or right.
For adults, their parents are still their teachers. The relationship between children or a teacher and a fellow can be finish, but the relationship between parents and their children is infinite. For example, I have never call non of my teachers to get an advice, but always ask my mother for anything. Therefore, parents are the lifelong teachers.
All in all, if all the factors are contemplated, we can easily reach the conclusion that parents are not only our first teachers, but also our best teachers. We should aware of this point and take better care of our parents to repay their efforts to teach us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the best'.
Suggestion: be the best
...Some people believe that parents cannot be best teachers because their mission is only ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ion is only parenting for their children,. However, in my opinion, parents are the...
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Line 9, column 335, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...inion, that student can not only become an successful adult but also has good pers...
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Line 13, column 223, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'called'.
Suggestion: called
... is infinite. For example, I have never call non of my teachers to get an advice, bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85082872928 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71947822128 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486187845304 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4933327845 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108061577129 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450014663514 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394344637966 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771410785985 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242612030744 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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