Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
One of the most popular quotes is, “You can’t build a strong building on a weak foundation”. Most people argue that parents can’t be the best teachers and others defend it that parents are the best teachers. In my opinion, parents are the best teachers. I feel this way which, I will explain in the following essay.
Firstly, I believe that our builders are our parents. They found our base as strong as possible, in other words, from the age of 0 to 6 our educators are our parents. They taught us how to speak, how to walk, how to behave, and all other etiquettes which are important for a bright future. For example, the mind of a newborn child is completely like a blank sheet, it’s only the parents who put their all energy to fill the blank piece of paper.
Secondly, only the parents know the strength and weaknesses. For instance, only parents know that their child is an introvert but a teacher can never know that. The academies and the teachers only teach programs and courses whereas parents teach them life lessons, teach them how to win this world, how to live together with others, or how to socialize. Technically, teachers cannot teach us how to live a happy life.
In conclusion, I agree that parents are the best teachers, as give us high-quality life lessons which are unforgettable and we can’t find any book or schools for those classes
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 52.1666666667 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 243.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65432098765 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51633892614 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559670781893 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 618.680645161 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4280317284 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 5.45110844103 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142714783372 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556214490408 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050132435717 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090423505162 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567893586052 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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