Do you agree/disagree with the following statement: “Reading newspaper or online news sources is a waste of time”
Reading plays an imperative role in an individual’s life. It not only enhances the knowledge but also strengthens the characteristics of the person. Newspaper and online news sources connect the person with the world. Some people believe that it’s waste of time but, I believe that it’s beneficial. I believe this way for several reasons which, I will mention in the following essay.
Firstly, one of the exquisite ways to acquire good quality knowledge is through the newspaper or online news sources. It helps the person to be aware of what’s happening in the world. It not only connects the person with the world but also improves the communication skills like reading, writing, and speaking. For example, if the student is preparing for ILETS/TOEFL, to outshine newspaper reading is mandatory because it not only generates reading habits but also builds vocabulary.
Secondly, there are many different topics an individual can read like business, editorial, world news, sports, and many more. For instance, if anyone wants to find a new job or anyone curious to know the result of a cricket match then a newspaper or online news source is the best way to find
In conclusion, reading newspapers or online news sources is always fruitful. Everyone’s main motive is to acquire knowledge from all over the work so, so newspaper or online sources are the best way possible way to do that.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 232.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05172413793 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7791798549 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4546726093 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6666666667 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300808622777 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986170902882 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902605592813 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183842179906 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485635952444 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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