Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past young people depended on their parents for making decisions. Today, young people are better able to make decisions on their own.
As some people may hold the view that the young people all the times are depended on their families to make a decisions; however, some others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that nowadays the young people are better in the making sole decisions. I personally agree with the second belief. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding and conspicuous reasons which persuade me to put forward this perspective.
The first exquisite reason which advocates my idea is the alteration of lifestyle. It is lucidly obvious that there is a huge difference and gap between the paternal relationships of the past and now. For instance, 50 years ago, when my father was the child in his family, his relationships with his parents was defined completely various than my links with my parents. He had to obey in any situation; he did have no any choice or option to express his desire contradicted with his family. On the other hand, currently I can assert my viewpoints and sights with no any barrier or obstacle. Thus, nowadays the adolescents have this chance to express their attitude and inclination freely and they are not dependent on their families any more.
The second reason is that the today's young people are more self-dependent. In comparison of the past lifestyle, the young individual who is 18 years old has this right to live sole and lonely. This condition forces him/her to be responsible and self-dependent, since there are no any advocates and adherences form his/her family members. Consequently, this person can make the decision easier than the young people in the past. A vivid example can be given to shed light on the subject is my own experience. I am living lonely since my 18 years old, when I had to live in Tehran for my education, and now I feel a bulk difference in my personality. I obtain the self-esteem, responsibility, and self-confidence. Consequently, in the most of critical situations I make my own decision with no any hesitation.
The last reason which confirms the accuracy of my perspective is that today's young are more informative. There is a list of the informative and comprehensive resources of information and data, which convey, update, and promote the individual's knowledge. The young generation is not exceptional from these individuals. According to the noteworthy intelligible research conducted in my country, more than the sixty nine percent of informative links' consumers in Tehran are the teenagers and adolescence. As a matter of fact, the amplified utilization of the informative links by the young people, makes them more wise and intelligible. Hence, they can make their decision based upon the wise, open, and well- developed mind and thought.
To wrap it up, all aforementioned reasons and examples lead to the conclusion that nowadays the young people can easily make their own decision solely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a decision' or simply 'decisions'?
Suggestion: a decision; decisions
... are depended on their families to make a decisions; however, some others may take an oppos...
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...d to obey in any situation; he did have no any choice or option to express his des...
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...an assert my viewpoints and sights with no any barrier or obstacle. Thus, nowadays...
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Suggestion: comparison,
...oung people are more self-dependent. In comparison of the past lifestyle, the young indivi...
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ble and self-dependent, since there are no any advocates and adherences form his/h...
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... situations I make my own decision with no any hesitation. The last reason whic...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Suggestion: sixty-nine
... conducted in my country, more than the sixty nine percent of informative links consumers ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['consequently', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'for instance', 'i feel', 'as a matter of fact', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.218867924528 0.229887763892 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.128301886792 0.158761421928 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.109433962264 0.0866891130778 126% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0471698113208 0.046263068375 102% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0716981132075 0.0685040099705 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0924528301887 0.118717715034 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0132075471698 0.0351676179071 38% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.03456005126 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.022641509434 0.0309702414327 73% => OK
Particles: 0.00188679245283 0.00188951952338 100% => OK
Determiners: 0.122641509434 0.0887237588012 138% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0150943396226 0.0209618222197 72% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0169811320755 0.0139019557991 122% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2894.0 2387.08602151 121% => OK
No of words: 479.0 408.028673835 117% => OK
Chars per words: 6.04175365344 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.331941544885 0.338922669872 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.256784968685 0.251872472559 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.200417536534 0.174417080927 115% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.150313152401 0.112833075102 133% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03456005126 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511482254697 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 59.8458878717 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 19.9583333333 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7459583825 48.84282405 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.583333333 120.699889404 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9583333333 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 0.644075263715 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 45.6368302018 45.7405998639 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.31297709924 1.45489161554 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3854323494 0.300154397459 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.105514373889 0.103427244359 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0682391879168 0.0752933317313 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.510210439665 0.497263757937 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162283878888 0.151897553556 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141006571593 0.114077575197 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883742892634 0.0781384742642 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.391425706843 0.336927656856 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0992373782393 0.067059652881 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275067728814 0.210909579961 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889726461344 0.0618886996521 144% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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