Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are happier when they give away extra money to charity or a good cause rather than when they spend it on themselves.
In today's fast-paced world, many individuals are just concerned with their own businesses, with little consideration for the wellbeing of others or the entire society. However, a rising number of individuals are willing to donate their money to charity in order to make the world a better place. What motivates them to do this? They are most likely happy than those who spend all of their money on themselves.
To begin with, helping others encourages us to feel good about ourselves. We believe we can make a difference in the world and that our activities are having a good influence. As a result, we might obtain a sense of self-satisfaction and pride, which is essential for pleasure. Those who are simply concerned with themselves, on the other hand, are unlikely to enjoy this sense of fulfillment. They may be happy for a time while they collect money, but money cannot provide them with a feeling of fulfillment in the long run. Even if he possesses a considerable quantity of money, Ebenezer Scrooge, the stingy major character in Charles Dickens' 'A Christmas Carol,' is not pleased. Only after he recognized his error and became generous could he be happy in the end.
Furthermore, when we give to others, we are forming relationships and social links, which makes us feel more connected to the world and to other people. Humans, as we all know, are social animals; thus, when we feel bonded to one another, we obtain a sense of security and hence feel happy. Furthermore, serving a worthwhile cause reminds us that there are causes larger than ourselves that we can support. Even if we don't know the individuals we serve, we may connect with them since we contribute to mankind as a whole. According to a Fudan University study done in 2021, people who prefer contributing to others have better degrees of social connectivity, around 69% more than those who are not inclined to do so. It is only through acting kindly toward other people that we may experience the connection that unites us all and maintain our happiness throughout our lives.
Another incentive is that if we continue to donate to charities, we may establish a reputation for giving, which will earn us more praise and friends. Everyone wishes to befriend generous individuals. We may enjoy our life more if we have more friends that support and advocate for us. Consider my brother; he enjoys donating to charities by donating his clothing, books, and money. Not only does he continue to perform acts of generosity on his own, but he also encourages others to do so. Having created a charity group in his college, he and his classmates annually conduct various charity events to assist the underprivileged. As a result, he becomes the most well-liked student in the university. When asked if he is satisfied with his life, he consistently responds, "Definitely!" It is his passion for philanthropy that binds him to his peers and allows him to fully appreciate life.
Overall, I agree with the viewpoint that individuals who are prepared to offer money to charity or contribute to a worthy cause are happier than those who never donate anything.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 80.0 43.0788530466 186% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2614.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 532.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91353383459 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90927168239 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511278195489 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 838.8 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8891182153 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.538461538 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164315730694 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474488763556 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480422524589 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110154995561 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398349752012 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 86.8835125448 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.