Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.
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The cloth everybody wear is very important in our society. Each kind of it is show rating everybody in society. some believe people behave differently when they wear different clothes, some other don't. In my view, people behave differently for two reasons.
First, they can make sense of proud when they wear expensive cloths. Many people who might seem good person when they would be low rank. However, they could acquir high rank to wear high costly rand and behave proud. For instance, when I was 20 years old I went to everwhere everybody like me because I always wore the cloths were high costly and I was always proud. one night, my uncle invited my family for Yalda night when it is the longest night in year. Fotunately, my mother washed my cloths and she told me that the cloths didn't dry on night. Poor me, I had to wear typical shirt that it is very outmoded. when we arrived at party anybody didn't pay attention to me as if I didn't present here. While, it is the worst excpreince in my life but I learn I won't be alway proud. As you can see, people have proud when they wear different cloths.
second, they are credited by other people. In order to get excellent job people wear different cloths and they may behave differently. For example, when I was in Tehran for my job I always went to my home by subway. one day, when I ate a cup of tea my buddy surprise me and I was shaching for seconds. Suddenly, I poured my tea on my coat that it's very nice. Fortunately, I had to go to meeting and I was vey upset because I didn't sense perfect. my coworker scowl me because I didn't wear appropraite cloth for importate annual meeting. Sadly, after meeting my boss fired me and he recorded this occurrnese in my resume and I coldn't get any job. this expreince taught me people according to kind of cloth you wear they behave you.
In sum, people behave differently when they wear different clothes. Not only they can make respect from their colleague but also they are attracted by other people. people should behave appropriate to be respected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, while, for example, for instance, kind of, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50397877984 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3564022925 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506631299735 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.4327074059 48.9658058833 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.3076923077 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88461538462 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278987495744 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103503240105 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127964374024 0.0737576698707 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236649620957 0.150856017488 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792334759797 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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