Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
At the turn of the new century, with the development of humans and modern technology such as transportation, more and more people tend to explore new things. Actually, people attitude towards traveling issue is varied person to person. Although many would argue that the traveling inside the country beneficial for the people and the most important factor to character building, In my opinion, traveling outside to foreign countries has a far greater impact and became easier. I would suggest two reasons based on my general facts to support the argument.
The first aspect to point out of that many benefits quickly stems from traveling outside your country. Admittedly, traveling to foreign countries is a great teacher to build character which that to learn the person depends on himself to build the personal life and career life. I would like to mention noteworthy research conducted by CSR institute in India. the discovered results suggest that Seventy-Five Percent of young generation indulge themselves on the internet to search about trips outside their country to learn more things such as different cultures and various language. My own experience is a compelling example of this I remember when I was in university I had a problem in English language, and when I was walking in the university I saw announcement about trips to England, Furthermore, I decided to book out on this trip to learn this language from native speakers and learning customs and traditions for this country.
Secondly, there has been a positive correlation between traveling to foreign countries and being successful. I still affirm the same idea because there is no guarantee that the different trips to other countries contribute to widening people's horizon, which will influence profoundly on society. And also trips for the outside country has a great importance on the quality of one's life. For instance, my father decided to quit from his work and traveling to China to learn everything about how to make spare parts of cars, moreover, he learned everything about that and came back to home to build the spare part factory. Additionally, he encouraged the young generation to work with him to open many factories to help the government to decrease from unemployment.
To draw a conclusion, taking what I mentioned above, I strongly believe that the traveling outside your country has many benefits for individual and society. And also traveling to foreign countries has a close tie-in motivation and creativity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2107.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1769041769 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82805999225 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523341523342 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.1231280965 48.9658058833 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.6875 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4375 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261940450945 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855906023628 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480576593722 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165703592515 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257471868807 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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