Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Traveling has tremendous leverage on our quotidian routine life. It influence in a direct and intangible way. It is utterly important to appreciate its indelible impact on the society. Although some people hold the viewpoint that travelling in our motherland will be more bebficial then visit new countries. However, others may disagree and hod a different intellect. In my perception and actual life observation which has led me to agree with the idea that visiting a nother forign society will hold a myriad of benefit than keeps travel with our own coutry. Inthe following essay, I shall delve into most outstanding reasons.
To commence with, this will helps us to develop communication skills to excel in our future career.For instance, during my sophomore year. I decided to take it in foreigon country. I went to Mexico because it is cheape .During my college study, I meet plethora of people who became my best friends. Furthermore, I learn a lot about their culture and history. Later, when I return to the USA, I keep in touch with my mexican friends. In the next years and after finishing my study and get a jobs in Mexicco. My frinds helped me alot because of their connection. I got promotion within few days and the company cover my commodation.On the other hand, I cannot get this high salary job in my own coutry nor wide relation because all people use to know many who desire to helps too. This will reduce my chance to get good job. Apparently, it must be taken into account that connections platy a pivotal role in forign country more eeficiently than our homeland.
In addition, visiting new country can helps learn new language. Bilingual persons can have better opportunity to get career and fulfill his financial dreams quickly. During my visit to Peru, I was have to learn Spanish, since many people cannot speak English. When I moved to USA. I face no diffculty to get jobs with higher salary, hence most of the works asks for person that could speak Spanish.in view of the fact that my only spoken English will not be a good helps to provide me a plenty of jobs.
To sum up, after contemplating all the factors that I mentioned before, Taking all reasons into consideration, I would reinforce my idea that journey to a forigon country will be more influential because wil helps us to makes new friends that be nefit in our future career and gain new language.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, then, for instance, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75961538462 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63931360989 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581730769231 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8684371686 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0869565217 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0869565217 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131991373423 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349797423425 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403145113123 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819323574334 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627954085041 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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