Do you agree or disagree with following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing.
Sometimes people should do some jobs that they do not like it and do not having good feeling about them. In my point of view, there is no advantages in these kinds of job, so I completely disagree with these jobs. I will support my idea with reasons as fallow.
First of all, doing job which there is no enjoyment will not efficient. Since the only reason of doing this kind of job is because of mandatory or some special circumstances therefore, people will not learn or acquire specific skills. For instance, when I was fifteen years old, my father sent me to work in mechanic shop whereas, I like to be sale-person. In order to this, I spend around six months there and worked as a mechanic, but I did not learn anything and I cannot remember how to fix car after five years. However, later I tried as a florist and I learned everything about flowers and prospect sharply and now, I have my own business and happy life.
In addition, for doing unwilling job we have to spend a lot of energy. One of the most significant demerits of these types of job is that they are boring which leads to decrease effectiveness. Also after a while they lose they passion and energy to continue and finish their duty. According to the new research which done by Iran medical institution (IMI), 85 percent of people, who asked to do job which they do not like, had bad feeling about themselves and half of them did not finish their job even. In contrast to unwilling job, jobs which people enjoy of doing that increase their zeal and their efficiency. So that they not only feeling nice but also they get more positive energy.
In conclusion, I disagree with doing job that there is no enjoyment. This essay indicated some reasons to support my idea.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are no advantages'?
Suggestion: there are no advantages
...eeling about them. In my point of view, there is no advantages in these kinds of job, so I completely ...
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Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... which leads to decrease effectiveness. Also after a while they lose they passion an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, first of all, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50632911392 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45135333066 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553797468354 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0770174257 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 5.45110844103 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283338818462 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104296904564 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112853526162 0.0737576698707 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19844736641 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836159915282 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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