Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today’s progressive world, computer games are developed and children are exposed to get influence on their mentality and physically conditions. However, most of the inventors and psychology believed that expanding the computer games has positive impact on people’s living standard. I am of the opinion who disagree with this view. The reasons to support my idea are illustrated in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, if children would like to increase their communication skills, should make friends and spend their time with them. Nowadays, most of the people should be capable enough in soft skills same as good enough in hard skills in this modern world. It goes without saying discovering of soft skills are considered in environmental communication. To be more specific, when the children waste their time with playing computers, they can not spend time with other people in the extrinsic world, so they can not acquire skills to have interface with others. In this regard, being in groups of people make the opportunity to approach with different views so it can expand your vision for solving the problems.
Furthermore, most computer games increase violence and children should not be allowed to learn it. Recently, committing a crime had culminated among younger people. So definitely it is the result of computer gaming which has disadvantage on the whole society. Also, working with computer does not require physical activity. Therefore, after a long time, kids do not exercise and it hurts their physical health. As a result, when they will be older, would lose being a good shape.
In conclusion, having considered the above-mantioned reasons into account, I am of the opinion that playing computer can lose their mental and physical efficiency of children so it is not benefit to spend their time with. The government should be aware the effect of this statement and create a wisdom solution soon to build the better future for next generation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 538, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'interfaced'.
Suggestion: interfaced
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result, on the whole, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18125 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77611886228 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553125 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8943473921 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5294117647 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309652461915 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884844636338 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562576693924 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180691778725 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00776781601692 0.0645574589148 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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