Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Playing computer games not only relax our mind but also have many benefits that some people choosed to ignore. If children would not be allowed to play these games, it would be a loss for them. For example, many parents argued that computer games could harm their children, decreasing their intellegence and more. However, in many recent researches, scientists proved that playing computer games could actually increase the abilities of human in many fields.
One of the benifits from playing computer games is higher responsiveness. Games such as CS and other shooting games allow players to train their responsiveness. In these games, players need to react in a short amount of time in order to survive till the end. If the player fail to shoot the enimies in the right time, they may be killed in a second. This brings a great opportunity for children to learn how to respond quickly.
Second, in the war games, for example Rise of Empire, players need to manage the limited resources and civilians to build a functional country in a perticular time. Moreover, in order to win the game, you have to buy the right weapons and train the adequate soldiers to defend the boundries. If you choose the wrong strategy and used up all the wheat, minerals, and money or being conquered by other countries, you will not have a chance to win. And that is why it is great for children to learn the ability of management in the game. they will know how to make a good balance between using time and resources.
While opponents may claimed that children should play sports but computer games, the latter were actually being included in many sports competitions. It was called E-sports and international players of computer games were treated like athletes in many countries. Additionally, the prize was pretty good, so it was definitely not a waste of time.
Due to many reasons above, children should not be restricted from playing computer games. Although, for me, I think the usage time could be limited.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, while, for example, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89766081871 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58584859861 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538011695906 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9998153272 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1578947368 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289138749623 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091801085265 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594388630532 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171471924355 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431094567977 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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