Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Playing a game on a computer is a common platform for entertainment in today's world. However, in my opinion, playing a game may have serious disadvantages in personal life. Supporting this position, I am going to point out a few reasons behind my position vividly.
First of all, playing a game on the computer will retard the performance of a student in their study. In the age of growing and learning many things, children focus more on gaming and forget to accomplish the target in their study. My personal experience backs up this statement. When I was in class 8, I bought a play station and quickly addicted to it. Then, I forget to do my homework I lost my excitement for the study cause I was so much engaged in the game; as a result, I had failed in a terminal examination. Since it is extremely engaging, a young mind may devote more time to playing than studying.
One massive ill effect of computer gaming is to create unhealthy beings. People will sit around a computer table almost all day; they bearly do the physical exercise, follow their hygenic routine and foremost, they may weaken their sight because of too long engagement in the computer screen. Besides, sitting in the chair more time may not according to our natural posture, which will problematic in the long run causing back pain.
Another problem with computer gaming is that children may lose a social gesture and sobriety. When gaming time, they will not interact with friends, family, and relatives. Consequently, they will find a social event around them awkward and discomfit. They even do not know how people get entertained, what makes people offended, and what to say in the meantime. However, if they will not develop gaming habits, they have plenty of time to get to know the social skills.
In conclusion, computer gaming is not profitable for children in terms of health, academic, and personality development basis. It would be better if children will invest their time in other important activities like studying, playing sports, and interacting with people.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, however, if, may, so, then, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89714285714 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68874600921 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562857142857 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3619588811 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2105263158 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4210526316 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94736842105 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246837740205 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787745493125 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414648511497 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142023880552 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361819306102 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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