Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Whitout any doubt, the epoch-making invention of the internet has altered humans' lives. Some people hold the negative perspective toward the fact that government should improve the internet accessibility besides their infrastructures' activities. While, others beilieve that without the internet, we are not able to do most of our works. As far as I'm concerned, having a well-access to the internet is very crucial and government should provide internet service for the member in society with no cast.
To beging with, given that you can hardly ever find a work which has no relation to the internet, have access to the internet is imperative and the government should consider it. Likewise, in numerous conditions such as COVID-19 pandemic, poeple have to work remotely through the internet. As an illustration, due to the COVID pandemic, our company has asked us to stay at home and telework since last year. Therefore, we all need a reliable and free internet to do our works properly. In this case, we must restrict our commute because of the stay-at- home order issued by the government. As a result, we use the roads less than before wich suggests that the government should consider to provide a strong internet access rather than focusing on the road services.
Moreover, the newly service for transporting is the internet taxis. For instance, Uber which is a kind of an internet taxi shows how it is important to have access to the internet anywhare, anytime. Nowadayes, people chiefly use their cell phones' data to get a taxi instaed of using public transporatations. This example demonstrates that the government should provide the internet avalablity for all people, rather less expensive.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that the internet is as important as the infrastructure services provided by the government. Due to the obligatory of the internet for the most jobs and because of som special conditions like COVID-19, people must have a well-connected internet. In addition, these days, some novel ways for transportations need internet as well, which require the government to provide the internet for all resident without any cost.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 348, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...able to do most of our works. As far as Im concerned, having a well-access to the ...
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Line 2, column 678, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider providing'.
Suggestion: consider providing
...ich suggests that the government should consider to provide a strong internet access rather than fo...
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Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'an' after a classification term. Use simply 'kind of'.
Suggestion: kind of
...et taxis. For instance, Uber which is a kind of an internet taxi shows how it is important...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, likewise, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17478510029 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96122621267 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535816618911 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3409527833 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.235294118 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5294117647 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381348780556 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129333128362 0.076458572812 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703758069901 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248638745185 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394106799187 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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