Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays , due to cutting-edge technology, most of the people have smartphone. Though internet smartphone can secure plenty of information, for example searching the solution for people's academic questions , locating the destination and so on. Besides, if people encounter danger or get lost in the strange place, internet can effectively locate the place where they are , which means that the internet have the capability about ensuring people's secure. Therefore, in my perspective, government should provide the internet for free.
To begin, people can employ the internets to search for a bunch of useful information which can make citizen have the instrumentality to grapple with more arduous work in turn improve the production of the country. Many of the student or employee will encounter the problem which need a profusion of time to deal with by themself. Most of the time this will result in low production of the education or the companies. However ,if people can usage the internet to look forward the solution to the problem this can save many time. On top of that, many information on the net is optimize by prominent professor. Those can make the students or employees use the minimum time to generate gorgeous consequence. For example, people who is major in engineering will encounter many arduous questions. Provided that there have the free internet they will find the instrumentality to solve the questions and learn that methods. This can let them obtain confident in turn make them put more emphasize on their academic work. The result of this is the education will enhance in this country.
In addition, if people are lost in the strange place, internet can provide themself or police officers their location, which can ensure their safety. If many place in the country do not provide the internet, people ,who get lost, can not find the correct path to achieve their destination. Moreover, police officers may also spend many time to find the people. However, people who have the internet can send their location to police and ask for their help, which can let police spend less cost and people who get lost will also less likely to be panic.
To sum up, internet can make people obtain a bunch of useful information and learn the knowledge from it. This can let the employees and students have better ability to cope with the formidable tasks in turn enhance the production in the country. People can also use the internet to ask for help when they get lost , which can ensure their safety. On the contrary, if government do not provide internet, citizen can not improve their ability by learning the knowledge on net. Moreover, they will also be dangerous when getting lost. Police may also spend more time to find them.It is evident that government should provide free internet.
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Nowadays , due to cutting-edge technology, most of...
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... solution for peoples academic questions , locating the destination and so on. Bes...
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...ectively locate the place where they are , which means that the internet have the ...
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... the education or the companies. However ,if people can usage the internet to look...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...e solution to the problem this can save many time. On top of that, many information on th...
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Line 3, column 546, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...his can save many time. On top of that, many information on the net is optimize by p...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...his can save many time. On top of that, many information on the net is optimize by prominent pro...
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Suggestion: optimized
...of that, many information on the net is optimize by prominent professor. Those can make ...
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...net is optimize by prominent professor. Those can make the students or employees use the ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun place seems to be countable; consider using: 'many places'.
Suggestion: many places
...tion, which can ensure their safety. If many place in the country do not provide the inter...
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...ntry do not provide the internet, people ,who get lost, can not find the correct p...
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...oreover, police officers may also spend many time to find the people. However, people who...
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...ernet to ask for help when they get lost , which can ensure their safety. On the c...
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...e may also spend more time to find them.It is evident that government should provi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in addition, on the contrary, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 30.0 9.8082437276 306% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2343.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 468.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00641025641 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61239638524 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.41452991453 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 734.4 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.999010809 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.625 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147924454352 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566393542807 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542106165631 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114279636138 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319775111874 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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