Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To remain happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than achieving success.
Nowadays success palys an increasingly important role in people's live in around the world and people much attempt to be more successful.But despite improtant of achieving success in people,s live, I entirely belive that remain happy and optimistic when we are fail is more important than achieving success. I feel this way strongly for two main reasons which I will elaborate in the following essay with two acadmic facts.
First, remain happy and optimistic when we fail sharply affect on our health. In this regards there are several acadamic papers which prove there is the close relationship between the poeples's abillities to face with a fail and pass it and their health. This is beacuse when people face with a fail their stress level will be enhance and due to this fact they risk to suffer form mental and physical problems will be increase. However try to keep ourself happy and optimistic can sharply reduce these risks.
Second,remain happy and optimistc when we fail help us to become more stronger.A few weeks ago, I wached a news form the BBC live stream, which in that reporter had an interview with Dr. Jan Holen, professor and head of a reasearch group at the Harvard University, who has been investigating on man factor that have effect on the people's sucess. they surveyed the boigraghy of more than 200 both successful and
unsuccessful businessman in the world. they research show that one of the main different between to this groups of people was on their behaviours when face with a fail. Approximately all of the successful people have several fail in their business like uncessful businessman, but despite them successful people try to remain thier optimistic in those times and also tried to learn more from their fail to can be sucsess in the future.
To sum up, based on the arguments explored above. I believe that most of the time, their people way to face with a fail may change their live and future. So it is more improtant for the people to learn both how face with a fail and how learn from that to cab be much sucessful in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, i feel, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.775 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55817347793 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511111111111 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.6283377285 48.9658058833 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.230769231 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6923076923 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282165667089 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104319190286 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762801857445 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17099790682 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715927901635 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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