in the modern day people need planning ability

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , why
Nowadays,why speed of technological change, todayd l...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l people need planning ability and skill to be success. I feel strongly about thi...
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Suggestion: .
...g essay. First, todays time is gold . Because today living cost sharply incre...
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Line 4, column 401, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
...n this situation, just people that have plan and planning ability can success and re...
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Suggestion:
...evelopment. For example some days ago, I watched news from BBC Live Stream, in wh...
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Suggestion: According
...200 successful people around the world. according to their research, they understoud whic...
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Suggestion: .
...w can improve their own planning ability . All of all, according to the above i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, for example, i feel, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 265.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94716981132 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56744782896 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596226415094 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.2481540905 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331616067833 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105291475956 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963017288666 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188640982571 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479400932836 0.0645574589148 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

More content wanted.

Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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