in the modern day people need planning ability
Nowadays,why speed of technological change, today'd life is so complex and in this way planning plays increasingly important role in the people's lives. So I entirly agree which all people need planning ability and skill to be success. I feel strongly about this for two main reasons that I will elaborate in the following essay.
First, todays time is gold . Because today living cost sharply increase, people have to work more and more every days to will be able to earn much money. With refrence to a research recently counducted by Harvard University, it reported which todays people have less free time to do their intrested fun. Like read a new noble or books, watch TV and so on. So in this situation, just people that have plan and planning ability can success and reach to their interst.
Second, in the modern life planning is vital for career development. For example some days ago, I watched news from BBC Live Stream, in which reporter did an interview with Dr. Johan Makly, the professor and head of a research group in the UBC university, who attempting to investagte main factor of successaion among people. They survived life's of more than 200 successful people around the world. according to their research, they understoud which one of the most improtant factor for success among these people are planning ability. SO it is important for people to take knowledge about how can improve their own planning ability .
All of all, according to the above information. I entirely agree with this opinion that today's planning ability is vital for people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, for example, i feel, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 265.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94716981132 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56744782896 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596226415094 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.2481540905 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331616067833 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105291475956 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963017288666 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188640982571 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479400932836 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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