Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadys, the development and the change in a variety of aspect of the society lead to a number of conceptial disagreement among the adult and their children. The adult want their children follow their guildence and have a promising future. The next generation, however, have their own thought and are unwilling to yield to the rules established by their parents. From my perspective, as a member of the next generation, I argue that we should not only obey to those rules without thinking.
First, Some rules come from the tradition and is out of time by now. The new generation should have their own moral discipline and some laws need to be changed. Take the example in my country. In traditional concept, the children are considered to be inferoir to parents, and they are supposed to treat their parents with respect from their heart. Their important event, such as occupition, marriage and so on, should be decided only by their parents. Those ridicurious traditions faded by in the revolution in the transition period between old China to modern China. However, some of parents still hold those corrupted concept and dominate their childrens life. For these concept, they should only be sent to the history meseum.
Many adults suppose their children to obey their rules without any requirement to themselves. Those cases are enormous in daily life. For instance, parents always ask their kids not to speak dirty words while themselves failed to be an example in home. The children can be a mirror to their parents, and every bad behavior is no more than the reflection of the environment in which the children grow. Therefore, Some rules should only be applied to kids after the parents doing so.
It is true that some tradition play an essential role in the development and stability of the nation. For example, some traditional moral rules teach us treat others with polite. However, we should reconsider the position of those rules out of time.
In a nutshell.I agree with the opinion that the societies does apply excessive rules on the young peoples, and some of those rules should be abandoned.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the parents') or simply say ''some parents''.
Suggestion: some of the parents; some parents
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Message: Did you mean 'this concept' or 'these concepts'?
Suggestion: this concept; these concepts
... and dominate their childrens life. For these concept, they should only be sent to the histor...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ose rules out of time. In a nutshell.I agree with the opinion that the societi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95505617978 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60893214815 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508426966292 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0137647051 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9523809524 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52380952381 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0897896614237 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0323026417823 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372776540077 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724717624092 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470525906615 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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