Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no doubt that nowadays, the underlying structures of societies have changed drastically
compared to the past. As a matter of fact, most people believe that the existing rules that today
societies force on the youth are overly strict. Although some people believe that young people have
more freedom than their parents had, I personally think that the rules that young people are expected
to follow today are too stringent. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most conspicuous
reasons and examples justifying my point of view.
The most significant reason coming to mind is the fact that as civilizations thrived, some certain norms
appeared which every individual was somehow obliged to conform to/comply with. In fact,
contemporary world contains countless norms and standards imposed on people, and each person is
required to behave according to them. Actually, this exerts a tremendous amount of pressure and stress
on people, especially young people who at the same time face lots of peculiar issues too. Not only do
these norms bring about numerous liabilities and responsibilities which are hard to fulfill, but also they
cause stress and mental illnesses. For instance, in my country, girls are mandated by law to wear
especial clothes since a very young age. However, this is not what all of the young girls want, and it can
really be tough for them to tolerate the heat and inconvenience of wearing such clothes all the time, so
this rule is highly strict on them.
Another equally noteworthy reason to bear in mind is concerned with this fact that nowadays, because
of the widespread use of social networks, people are rubbed robbed of their privacy, which, I believe, is
one of the most primary rights of any human being. In particular, social networks like Instagram and
Facebook, which allow for sharing photos and videos, pose a threat to everyone in terms of security and
privacy because now everyone should be careful not to make any mistakes because if they do, everyone
will know of their mistakes owing to the fast diffusion of news and photos in these platforms. This, I
believe, leads to stress, anxiety, and even depression, particularly in young people/the youth. Actually,
results of a study conducted on a group of people aging aged 18 to 30, which I have recently read an
article about, indicate that the more a person engages in social networks, the more stressed out he gets.
This is actually one of the most crucial traits of our contemporary society that it imposes strict rules and
norms on the youth.
To summarize, contemplating all the aforementioned remarks, we safely reach the conclusion that
nowadays the rules that societies expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, really, so, for instance, in fact, in particular, no doubt, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2381.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 458.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19868995633 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65475607725 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561135371179 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 708.3 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9916986804 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.8125 100.406767564 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.625 20.6045352989 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 28.0 4.53405017921 618% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25599382107 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845544438542 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835889158701 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665126419317 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961185917931 0.0645574589148 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 11.7677419355 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.