Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The 21st century is the information century, and if one wants to keep the pace of booming technology, which is developing in an unprecedented rate, he or she should has quick and inexpensive access to information whenever and wherever it is needed. Internet is invaluable source of any data we need. But some are of the opinion that this access to large amount of information through internet can be destructive and bring about some difficulties, while others think otherwise. I subscribe to the latter idea on the ground that by means of internet we can access to any information we need quickly; and also purveying data from internet needs less money; and we access the information wherever we need.
First and foremost, internet is a very quick source of information that we can attain whatever is needed at least time. Take, for instance, if we need a book we should go to a bookstore which and find our book. But if we use internet, we can search easily for the book and download it in some minutes; by doing so, we do not squander our precious time. Also this can help to preserve our environment by not using vhiachles to go to the bookstore and make our city a better place to live.
Moreover, with the today’s economic recession, which is commonplace in many countries the cost of earning information is very important and needs specific considerations.With this in mind, getting information from internet ,that needs less money and there is a lot of data on the internet that is free, can be significant advantage for this type on data source. Also, internet can be used in wherever we need and this make it convenient to use so that we do not need carry our data sources, as books, with ourselves.
To sum up, taken all this into account, I do believe that internet is inestimable and vital source of information that is an inseparable part of our lives. Imagine what would happen and what should we do to meet our increasing demands without internet?
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...an unprecedented rate, he or she should has quick and inexpensive access to informa...
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Line 2, column 353, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
..., we do not squander our precious time. Also this can help to preserve our environme...
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Line 2, column 422, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e our environment by not using vhiachles to go to the bookstore and make our city...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: With
...rtant and needs specific considerations.With this in mind, getting information from ...
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Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... mind, getting information from internet ,that needs less money and there is a lot...
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Line 3, column 472, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[3]
Message: Did you mean 'to carry'?
Suggestion: to carry
...onvenient to use so that we do not need carry our data sources, as books, with oursel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, while, at least, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71304347826 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84123033069 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495652173913 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.7566646716 48.9658058833 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.5 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 20.6045352989 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166588039359 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723834629024 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432693857546 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113486211711 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385471571991 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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