Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Internet is one of the most important inventions of all decades for sure and it has changed everything sice its advent. Everytime we face to a problem, we can easily google it and after some seconds, get access to millions of information regarding that topic. Some people believe taht Internet is really useful and by providing lots of information can help us a lot, while others go against this point. In my view, internet by providing tones of information makes us more confused and unsure and creates lots of problems. I would like to elaborate my opinion with following reasons.
First, all the information on the internet are not reliable. The most important characteristic feature of an inforamtion source is its reliability, and this is while we can not trust all we find on the internet. Everyone can easily create a webpage and upload some information about any field and topic and this is exactly the thing which can make internet dangerous and not reliable. last year, when I was doing my master's degree project, I faced to a problem which could not find its answer in my books. I seeked for probable answer on the internet and found some answers, but when I checked them with my supervisor, she told me they are all wrong and if I use these information in my thesis project, I will lose my point for sure. After that day, I decided not to trust everything I find on the internent and everytime I find an answer on internet I really cast doubt on it and cannot trust it easily. That is why I believe, sometimes, internet can create more problems than solving them.
Secondly, Internet makes people confused. We all know that most of the problems we face to, have two or maybe three logical answers, but when we seek our answer on the internet we will find hundred on answers which really can make us confused and creates problem. There are just some rare topics which have too many acceptable answers, but when we search something on the internet, we get tones of answers which not only not help us, but also make us confused and we cannot chose the answer which is the best. Last week a friend of mine had a tiny problem with his problem and when he googled it found too many answers, At first he was totally confused and was not sure about them, so he tried all of them and faced to more problems at the end. I belive, each time we look for an answer, we must tries just one or two solution and by searching more and more we just get more confused and can not solve our problem even if its answer is really obvious and easy.
To cut the long story short, my conviction is that access to much information on internet creates problems and that is why we canont count on internet as the thing which can always help us to find solutions. Reading books may takes so much time and be boring, but based on this point that all books have revised before and a valid institution has approved its truthworthy, we can assume that books are better resources for finding our probable answers than internet and that is why I think internet and its countless information creates problems than solving them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Last
...ke internet dangerous and not reliable. last year, when I was doing my masters degre...
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Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...told me they are all wrong and if I use these information in my thesis project, I will lose my po...
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Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...our answer on the internet we will find hundred on answers which really can make us con...
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Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help us find' instead.
Suggestion: help us find
... internet as the thing which can always help us to find solutions. Reading books may takes so m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, as to, i think, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 35.0 13.8261648746 253% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 85.0 43.0788530466 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2551.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 562.0 407.700716846 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53914590747 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86893614481 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44087452389 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.421708185053 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 804.6 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.1781699269 48.9658058833 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.263157895 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5789473684 20.6045352989 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160331711332 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697521818619 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049767133893 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127606030968 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657222617658 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.1575268817 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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