Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes people think nowadays the media (TV, newspaper, Internet) are less concerned about the accuracy of news than in the past, and the incorrect information may cause more problem to the public.
Nowadays, people normally accept the truth that the trustable news are valuable. However, sometimes there are incorrect news among other news that it is the cause of doubt among people. some people think that the amount of these wrong information decrease now rather than past, although, some people have opposite opinion about this statement. In my opinion, the amount of lying in modern news becomes more incorrect than past. that is due to increasing the volume of data that they produce, moreover people do not have time for investigation, and with new technology identifying wrong data is hard.
First and foremost, in modern World, the huge number of news produce every day; therefore, the process of correcting and exploring is out of place. among these immense volume, it is more likely presence wrong data. in other words, the magazine have been filling their journals with small fault since they need to publish them every day. For example, my brother has worked for ten years in a newspaper office. he said that sometimes they must completed their journal for publishing; thus, they were obligated to use wrong data or unrilaiable news.
Second, all of us know, nowadays, people do not have extra time for investigate the accuracy of news; hence, newspaper are sure that people do not ensue their data. otherwise, there are a few number of people that they were sensitive about the accuracy of information. For instance, I normally persue just sport news. I dont have any time to research about the trustable source; therefore, I accept the news without investigation.
Last but not least, the technology has a lot of achievment in new world; thus, making some unreal situation is readily. To put it differently, magazine present wrong news that identifying the accuracy of them is hard using new technology. As an example, sometimes they publish photo from celebrity people that they useing photoshop application; hence, it is hard to people detec that it is unreal.
As outlined above, it is clear that with advancement in technology and devices, the ways that magazine can make wrong data is more likely rather than past. that is because of the volume of data is high, so you will not able to detec wrong data, moreover, people are busy and there is not any time for exploring among other sources, and technology is the major cause of magazine achievment in intrigating people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97506234414 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56739192502 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483790523691 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 642.6 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8747963984 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1052631579 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211997939702 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07048110453 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512448303247 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125165555155 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768536834463 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.