Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Companies should pay for employees to get a university degree.
Nowadays people normally accept the truth that knowledge play a momentous role in our life; therefore, existing degree from the university is necessary. Although the companies don’t have time to spending for degree of their employees , having worker with a good knowledge can help to improve the goals of their companies. That is due to having knowledge is the cause of improve the creativity and the quality of their products.
All of us know, when you have a career without academic training, you could not improve your work and just do your functions as a craft. While, each person for having achievement in their work are required to have creativity and knowledge about their careers. To put it differently, when there is a knowledge about the works, there are a lot of open aspects of works that you can exploit from them. For example, when I was student in the university, I worked for a computer company. I and my co-workers had situated in the line of products; thus, we must just assembled the pieces of computer because of we don’t have any knowledge about the computer and pieces. After I graduated from the university, I have worked for the company but I had idea about accelerate the speed of assembling and how they must be assembled. Consequently, I could improve their productivity with the knowledge that I had obtained from the university courses.
All of companies are participated in a competition with other rival; hence, existing the products with high quality could guarantees their achievements. Indeed, people compare the products of various companies wethere one of them is good for choosing or not. Otherwise stated, the quality has a high importance for the companies that is directly related to the knowledge of their employees. The research of a company that make light bulb show that the employees with knowledge are more sensitive to their functions despite of other workers.
As outlined above, companies are inclined to invest on the degree of their employees with give a time to them for have a good education. That is because of their goals are improve their productivity and having a good quality of their products.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 239, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o spending for degree of their employees , having worker with a good knowledge can...
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Line 2, column 594, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because we' instead.
Suggestion: because we
...t just assembled the pieces of computer because of we don't have any knowledge about the...
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Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'guarantee'
Suggestion: guarantee
...ng the products with high quality could guarantees their achievements. Indeed, people comp...
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Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
...ne of them is good for choosing or not. Otherwise stated, the quality has a high importan...
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Line 3, column 417, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir employees. The research of a company that make light bulb show that the emplo...
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Line 4, column 172, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...ion. That is because of their goals are improve their productivity and having a good qu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9696969697 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79049484683 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.1927202434 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.75 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6875 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157539899846 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654485035745 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433727514827 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109595612662 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028780228403 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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