Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Being involved in communication with other people, we inadvertently can copy some features or behavior styles of people around. These can be our parents, co-workers, teachers at school or our friends. There is opinion that teachers have a greater impact on us than even our best friends. Otherwise, I do not agree with this point of view.
The first reason why I disagree is connected with the time. I think that most of students do not spend more time with their teachers than they do with their friends, that’s why the last ones influence more, because they see each other more often. For example, even my coordinator at the university does not influence me like my best friend does. This is because of the reason we do not spend the great amount of time, and even we have some time to meet, we discuss only important topics.
The second reason is about the strong connection between friends. I believe that after our parents and relatives, our friends are the next who know a lot of things about us. They may be aware of some our troubles, worries, and fears. Though this is a negative example, but sometimes friends may use this type of information to manipulate us and, thus, influence. For instance, recently a friend of mine has had this negative experience. She changed a lot, she was being rude, but at the same time shy and closed for other people. I could hardly recognize her, because she had been an easygoing person. After I found out that her best friend used her secret to rule her life.
Moreover, I believe that our friends may have stronger impact on us, because they may be role models for us. We can start pretending to be such kinds of a person to be interesting to friends. This type of behavior is widespread among school boys, students, and the young, because people of that age always want to have the coolest and most popular friends. That’s why very often we can take friends as a model to follow.
Thus, I believe that we are influenced by our friends much more that our teachers. There is variety of reasons supporting my point of view: our friends know us better than the stuff at university or at school, also, we spend more time with them, and that’s why may take them as a perfect example to copy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the students') or simply say ''most students''.
Suggestion: most of the students; most students
...s connected with the time. I think that most of students do not spend more time with their teach...
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Line 5, column 603, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cause she had been an easygoing person. After I found out that her best friend used h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62437810945 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46061146807 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5691263634 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04545454545 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198754634992 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580414717098 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766122015294 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118512382666 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844503498729 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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