Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Of all the hard jobs around, one of the hardest is being a good teacher. This quote crystalize the paramount importance of teacher’s job to the society. Almost all people have went to school when he or she was a child until they become adult, so teachers must be ascertain learning process of every one attend in the class. In addition, teachers have interact with all of the students, so s/he must have cognition for a wide variety of attitude of them too. Therefore, people every time was respectful toward them. When it comes to this point, some people wonder what is differential appreciate of teachers from the past time until now. One outstanding idea here is that teachers were more appreciated by society in the past than nowadays, and I personally repudiate this idea. In the ensuing lines, two reasons will be explained for this response.
One imperative reason coming to my mind at first is that nowadays science become more valuable for our society. By coming advanced technology based on science, that is to say people life become more convenient compared to the past time day by day. Now it is very controversial finding new ways for creating more things, so it comes as no surprise that people cave for becoming more knowledgeable from early age without trying in vain, when embark on studying in school even. Therefore, teachers considering important role in the modern society, and many are under the impression that they have more sprite to teach in the best way must appreciate more, some notable example of which are salary for them grow than the past time. In our society recently especially one days is belong to teachers, all of students buy something to pay homage to them.
Another reason is that, social relationship between teachers and students become more compared to the past time. , teachers have less seriously in the class for saying you must study harder. Owning to the fact that they have more time for interaction with students in the social channel, so they do not need say everything in the class. In other words, their pressure of them is less and have better relationship with their students now lead to get more attention of their students too. For instance, my cousin who recently went to school, in other words, he begins to study in school now. I saw he is member of telegram channel class of his school, and he desires sending some massage for his teacher and his father type them for him. He also said to me he loves his teacher and someday records his voice and say “I like you”.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
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- Some parent offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school Do you think this is a good idea? 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'crystalizes'.
Suggestion: crystalizes
...est is being a good teacher. This quote crystalize the paramount importance of teacher&apo...
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Line 2, column 181, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[6]
Message: Note: went is a past participle of "wend". Did you mean 'gone' (past participle of "go")?
Suggestion: gone
... to the society. Almost all people have went to school when he or she was a child un...
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Line 2, column 356, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'interacted'.
Suggestion: interacted
...n the class. In addition, teachers have interact with all of the students, so s/he must ...
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Line 2, column 370, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...n addition, teachers have interact with all of the students, so s/he must have cognition f...
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Line 2, column 621, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...rential appreciate of teachers from the past time until now. One outstanding idea here is...
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Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
... become more convenient compared to the past time day by day. Now it is very controversia...
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Line 3, column 718, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...which are salary for them grow than the past time. In our society recently especially one...
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Line 3, column 764, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one day', 'a day', or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: one day; a day; days
...ime. In our society recently especially one days is belong to teachers, all of students ...
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Line 3, column 776, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'belonged'.
Suggestion: belonged
...society recently especially one days is belong to teachers, all of students buy someth...
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Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...nd students become more compared to the past time. , teachers have less seriously in the ...
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Line 4, column 114, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... become more compared to the past time. , teachers have less seriously in the cla...
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Line 4, column 309, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[3]
Message: Did you mean 'to say'?
Suggestion: to say
...the social channel, so they do not need say everything in the class. In other words...
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Line 4, column 679, Rule ID: MASSAGE_MESSAGE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'message'?
Suggestion: message
...his school, and he desires sending some massage for his teacher and his father type the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2282.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 475.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80421052632 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51996126712 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507368421053 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 712.8 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4306334537 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2173913043 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.652173913 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86956521739 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324549650066 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1145672319 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141395694477 0.0737576698707 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.351356961503 0.150856017488 233% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.37475335959 0.0645574589148 580% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.