Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Teachers are valuable in all over the world, Although these days people doe not care about them.
In my perspective, people should appreciate them but they do not do it. They think many facts are affected them to be invisible in society. I am going to mention a couple of reasons.
to begin with, technology is developing day by day and online learning and electronic books and some other facilities are the main reasons which make teacher less valuable in people eyes.
For example, one of my friend did not like to attend lecture in college however attending to lecture were obligated so his executes were that the teacher doesn’t teach very well in class and it’s better to download some eLearning video and follow that, in fact his results were much better than us who have been attended to lecture those days. That’s why he always believed that teachers don’t have commitment these days. That’s why they don’t teach well. May be If they have earned more money, they would spend more energy.
Secondly, as population increase, the teachers population grows too. When we have many specialist in a filed as a result their value get decrease which absolutely isn’t good thing to happen but it is happening. For instance, many teachers apply to a university but only some of them will be taken and because of competition they accept the position even with low price however it isn’t fare. In addition to that, they might be happy to be accepted by department but in fact they brought down their value as a teacher. They work hard with out enough money. The result will be less work after while.
Thirdly, teachers don’t spend that much energy as before. No one knows why, but may be because they thinks online resources are there for students and they can use them and no need to be helpful in class. One of my friend told me since my professor recognized that there is a guy in YouTube to teach the subject well he doesn’t spend energy and time to teach us the subject well as a result student don’t appreciate him.
To sum up, it is true that appreciation is less todays for teachers but it depend to them. If teachers start to be active again with commitment so again people will obey them as befor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
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... a result student don’t appreciate him. To sum up, it is true that appreciation ...
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Suggestion: fewer
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Message: Did you mean 'depends'?
Suggestion: depends
...tion is less todays for teachers but it depend to them. If teachers start to be active...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, as a result, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67258883249 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36280239696 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530456852792 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.1711380784 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.05 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181542618359 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562209771528 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367414004292 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835588669496 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313374995974 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.