Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Without a doubt of a shadow, the children of the current decade will form our future, thus the role of the teacher is of much importance to prepare our children to contribute effectively to a flourishing society. In this regard, it is necessary to put a high value on teachers and coaches of our kids to make them satisfied in order to conduct their duties in a perfect manner. However, I think people nowadays barely respect teachers as much as needed, and they no longer are thankful to them. I believe in this way for several reasons that I will elaborate on in the following essay.
To begin, in today's world, parents think about themselves as the most and only critical instructors of their children's lives rather than teachers. The effects and importance of teachers have been obviously underestimated. This can be understood from the newly emerged behaviors of people. Take my brother as a compelling example. My brother has a 14-year-old son. Since the spreading of the Covid-19 virus in the world, the schools have turned out to be in an online form, so the children are not going to classes in person. This change leads my brother to completely prevent my nephew from attending even online courses. believing in the notion that teachers are not helpful in improving and enhancing the growth of his child, he has begun to conduct homeschooling as an alternative for an ordinary way of going to or attending classrooms.
Secondly, most of the teachers are complaining about their low salaries. Recently, they have been in trouble in making good lives for their families. Although many other factors may have contributed to this condition, the low range of compensation seems to be one of the important reasons. For instance, I would like to describe the growth rate of teachers' income in our country. Our country that is named Iran is suffering from a high degree of inflation. Due to the mentioned fact, the government raises the income of employees in several sectors annually. However, it has refused to increase the salary of teachers in the past two years. Annoyed and unsatisfied teachers have started to demonstrate their angry in many ways. This reality clearly illustrates the low degree of appreciation toward teachers by the government and people.
Referring to mentioned reasons and examples, I think it is a true fact that the position of teachers in our society has been highly decreased. This is mostly because of the behaviors that people show about these groups of persons and the challenges of those people in earning money. Anyway, I strongly am of the belief that we should respect the teacher as much as possible to make a better community for ourselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a perfect manner" with adverb for "perfect"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...isfied in order to conduct their duties in a perfect manner. However, I think people nowadays barel...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
...hew from attending even online courses. believing in the notion that teachers are not hel...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, however, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2237.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90570175439 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76029422062 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513157894737 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7024974053 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2083333333 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104402428026 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030000694052 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300239148738 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.06593455037 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259518975258 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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