Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Each society has various kinds of groups in different ages. In my view, the most important and determining people are youngsters. Their actively contribution to the community can make a monumental difference. Thus it is of much importance for a country to have young people who are eager to spend their energy and time to create a better society. To answer the question specificly, I believe that those people currently play their role very well and effectively. I thinks this way for several reason that I will elaborate on in the following essay.
First of all, a lot of adults, who are graduated from university, start their own business to have a positive impact on their city. This can be easily understood, if we just check the number of new start-ups that have begun to provide some services in society. My own observation is a compelling example of this. Among 20 friends who were graduated from our university, 7 people of them now have a business on their own. Although some may claim that all of them are starving for making more money, but I believe that contributing to the society, at least, has been one of their major aspirations, if not, they would just go for other easier works such as trading, which is more attractive in respect of making money.
Furthermore, what is obvious is that we have more volunteers for philanthropic works more than any time in history. Young people now are more concerned about the place they live in, thus they take some responsibilities in order to do something good for their society, without expectation of any compensation. For example, when the coronavirus started spreading through the cities, it was young people who get volunteered to help limited number of staff of hospitals bravely and fearlessly. Haven't they done this, we would be in horrible situation.
On the other hand, it might be true that these individuals now do some works that may be perceived wrong, such as using their cellphones a lot, playing video games and etc. However, I believe that these kind of stuffs are not something abnormal and harmful for society. In addition, due to the necessities of their age, they need to have more exciting moments. The past events have proved that they will be forthcoming for any assistance if required.
Taking those reasons and examples into the consideration, I think youngsters devote sufficient time to their societies. Their lifestyles have changed but it is not a negative sign, it is only an alternation resulted in becasue of the fundamental changes in the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Suggestion: think
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Suggestion: several reasons
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Suggestion: Haven't
...ff of hospitals bravely and fearlessly. Havent they done this, we would be in horrible...
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Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'did'?
Suggestion: did
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Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, well, at least, for example, i think, in addition, kind of, such as, first of all, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2109.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88194444444 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80745623034 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553240740741 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2099682084 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.428571429 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158002336523 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477692288873 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386518301805 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947307488466 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376285745487 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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