Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Although many people believe that teaching is one of the most valuable jobs in the world and that teachers should be appreciated all the time, I think that today teachers are less appreciated by society than in the past. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in this essay.
First of all, in the past, teachers were the only people who could teach students, and there was no other option for students to use for learning new stuff. However, nowadays, technology has improved a lot, and there is no need to have a teacher to learn new things. In other words, new devices such as computers and the Internet let students learn as much as possible in various subjects; therefore, students are not dependent on teachers to understand specific areas of knowledge. They can find and learn everything they want through the Internet. As a result, the importance of teachers in society has declined, and they are not appreciated like before. For example, my little sister does not think her teacher has an essential role in her education because she believes that searching the Internet and using online data is a more convenient way to learn her lessons.
Furthermore, teaching was a popular and respectful job in the past, and people respected teachers more than now. Most people believed that teaching was the most important job and that teachers were the highest social state of society. In contrast, new jobs have emerged in recent years that seem important to people, so a few people think that teachers play a crucial role in society. As a result, teaching has lost its importance to many people who believe that other careers are more beneficial for society. My own experience is an appealing example of this. My father is a teacher and was always appreciated by my family and neighbors. However, these days he is not appreciated by those people, and my brother is greatly respected. Because he is a computer engineer and solves my family's and neighbors' problems with their electronic devices. It seems that his job is more appreciated than my father's job since more people rely on computer expertise rather than teaching.
In conclusion, I think people appreciate teachers less than before. It is because most students do not rely on teachers to be taught and because some new jobs have emerged that did not exist in the past. Hence, many think new jobs are more critical and beneficial for most people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2014.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84134615385 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57512853703 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46875 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 619.2 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1717398513 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.7 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198544512628 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682825810899 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459323340767 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13004372956 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00952181523836 0.0645574589148 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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