Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made the world a better place to live. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made the world a better place to live. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

There is no doubt that technology has made people`s life better. With the technologycal development, people all around the world got a chance to advance in their personal and professional life. Personally, I agree that technology has made our world a great place to live.
First of all, technology helps people to communicate to each other. This is especially important for those who live away from their home countries. For instance, originally I am from Russia, but I have been living in the United States for almost four years. Traveling to my country is incredibly expensive, and because of that, I can not do it as often as I wish. Utilisation of computer, wich is a great technological advance, helps me to keep in touch with my family and friends whom I left behind in Russia. By using different kind of computer programs, such as Skype, I am able not only to talk to the people I love, but even see them. To that end, the modern technology let me participate in life of my family and friends while being so far away from them.
Secondly, contemporar technology helps people to grow professionally. Not every person is capable of attending a college or University in person. A lot of adults who want to advance in their education have families and full time jobs, and in this way, they lack free time to drive to an educational entity. In spite of that, nowadays, people have an opportuniny to receive distant education by attending online classes. My own experience is an appealing example of this. In order to become a pharmacist in the U.S., I have to pass TOEFL test. In order to do it, I need help from a professional tutor, but I don not have time to drive to life classes. Istead, I take online classes by using my computer, which saves me time on practice and makes me closer to my professional goal of becoming a pharmacist in the United States.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that humanbeing benefits from technology. This is because technology lets people keep in touch with those who are important to them and contribetes to prople`s professional enhancement.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...prople's professional enhancement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, such as, first of all, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76373626374 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9331963563 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8173448155 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141381083348 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478349686994 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655079719949 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103199867552 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827736438271 0.0645574589148 128% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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