Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is advisable that some people argue more attention to various perspective of a work can bring better result for them. That someones think in this way and spend much time about it without any certain decision makes me unhappy. Because I do not think so. In my view, our world is developing with an unbelievable speed, so that point of view is not convincing. I feel this way for 3 main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First, human's time is limite; no one can lives for ever. People should exploit from their life more and more before they can not benefit from their nice chance of being live. As a result, it is convincing that they make fast and certainly correct decisions without any doubt. For instance, my father had many desires in his life but he could not reach to them; Because of wasting time to get some critical decision in his life. He passed away!
Not only time is a limiting factor in human's life, but also happening some situations in life is a chance that may does not repeat again. For example, last year, there was an occasion for buying car in my country; Because many car producers had special selling condition. In spit of deciding to buy a car, I wasted time for being more acknowledgment about their products; I did not want to make risk. Now, the prices have been increased and unfortunately I can not buy it.
In addition, there are many unexpected situations in life, which affect on both our thoughts and works. Five years ago, when I decided for immigrating to the united state, I thought that I should have a better TOEFL scores for applying for a high-ranking university. I missed many of my chances. Even worse, new president of US placed some limitations on my country's people. As a result, I changed my mind. Had not I wasted my time much five years a go, I could have been in US now.
In all, what drives someone to do fast and risk making mistakes would perhaps fall in to 3 basic categories including shortage of human's life time, happening special occasion situation, and worrying about not anticipated events. However, it is better to consider side effects of these decisions to preventing of probable evil conditions, or having enough readiness for dealing with them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'live'
Suggestion: live
...irst, humans time is limite; no one can lives for ever. People should exploit from th...
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Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: REPEAT_AGAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'repeat'.
Suggestion: repeat
...s in life is a chance that may does not repeat again. For example, last year, there was an o...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ny unexpected situations in life, which affect on both our thoughts and works. Five years...
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Line 9, column 138, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...categories including shortage of humans life time, happening special occasion situation, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6432160804 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55063120669 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557788944724 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3165994785 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9523809524 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0941344306053 0.236089414692 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0290344697575 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316170403612 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.058560581031 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312234933792 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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